This, paired with the fact that this is just a reincarnation of Final Straw, leads me to one conclusion: Bellerephon (sp?) is lacking inspiration at the moment. I think they call the characters the author's created Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus. I almost dropped the fic but found he/she picked it up a bit and ended well. The guns and arrows irked me A LOT in the last fic. All the characters are very 2-D, they don't have any other sides to their character or have any development. If I'm being as harsh as I usually am, it's downright unoriginal.
That other kid (forgot his name too) reminds me of.Ron Weasley.
that chick Harry's now going out with (after a day of contact may I add) seems familiar.wait a minute.she's Hermione Granger! Yes he's fallen into a trap I personally have fought against allen into: the Canon OC!Į.g. The only thing remaining to be seen is how will he handle creating a whole new enviroment, without using standard canon enviroment and characters as clutches. Well, this story has a chance of turning out interesting, especially seeing as the author had kept good update rate with "Final Straw". But since Harry won't be around canon characters much, I guess it's understandable. The only thing the author had announced is lighter tone of the story (no character deaths and angst) and good Hermione. I have no idea where will the story go from here. In the fourth chapters some things are done differently, allowing Harry to escape to magical school in US. This is alternate version of The Final Straw from the same author ( thread), where Harry decides to escape to America after all, instead of going back to Hogwarts.Īt the moment, there are 4 very long chapters posted (57,000 words), with the first three being more or less the same as in Final Straw. Destination: The US.įinally a new Independant!Harry story with good prospects. Harry decides that his life expectancy will be greatly enhanced if leaves Dumbledore and Voldemort behind. Pairings: Unknown at the moment (probably OC or none)
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